- Colin Nicholson
- Executive Poster
- Posts: 1836
- Joined: 04 Jul 2010, 19:15
- Location: Morpeth, Northumberland
As Gill suggests, some of your pedalling needs care, not only using legato pedalling to join the leaps, but more changes of pedal needed during changes of harmony.
On occasions, your phrasing needs care - there seems to be an accent on the 4th beat of the bar, and the melody 'dips' in and out of tone and projection. Your left hand accompaniment is OK.
If you have written this yourself, I may suggest you start the melody 'solo' then develop it later into octaves/ RH chords.... keeping the top notes projected.
Maybe your piano needs tuning aswell? .... a few octaves didn't sound quite right
Steady performance, but not mind blowing just yet....