Piano concerto 1 - original composition

[Francoisfj]

Hello, I am new to this forum, this is one of my composition, it's still unfinished though
Please let me know what you think

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=rwhkSKws_C0

[eladbu]

Hey.
Most of it sounds really good.
But at 0:45-0:50 something in the string ensemble doesnt sounds "right" in my ear.
Do you have the sheet music of the piano part?